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Hi! Your essay is wonderful. The first thing I noticed is your language. It's very detailed and I like your strong word choice. Your introduction is attention grabbing and intriguing.
Here are some points:
- "Ellie Young interviewed Dr. Tahoon, and," you should explain who Dr. Tahoon is before introducing their quote to reduce confusion.
- In the second paragraph, you should add "This is true, but if an...."
- Add testing to Anti Standardized (since you did it for Pro Standardized Testing)
- Change "but one has no access and little time; you can’t not accurately gauge their level" to: "..but one has no access and little time, you can't accurately gauge their level."
- Change "Test anxiety is a leading problem, and 60% of students suffer from it, and the financial situation a student might be in all affects how accurate a test is" to "Test anxiety is a leading problem. 60% of students suffer from testing anxiety and a financial situation may affect a student's test scores." or something like that lol. the sentence was too long and choppy
this is an amazing essay ^_^ i hope you do well!! thx for letting me proofread.
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