The best answer for this question would be:
<span>The paragraph is choppy and in need of transitions.
It lacks the transitions needed in the passage. It doesn't flow right, and the topic jumps from one another making it a confusing passage to read. </span>
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Why is the Sky Tree important to the people in Sky Land? It provides them with shade. It provides food for them.
Answer:
1 he had a major obsession with gold
2 he could eat anything his food would turn to gold
3 hes greedy,
4 nothing would bring him satisfaction until the world was his treasure room and filled
with gold
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