Not bad, i'd say. just make sure you add transitional words/phrases so that it all makes sense, okay? other than that, i really love it, great job!
also, it does include logos, pathos, and ethos.
Answer:
He believes he owes it to his country to return.
Explanation:
According to the story of Pink and Say by Patricia Polocco, they are both young children who join the army during the American Civil War to help bring an end to slavery and become friends on the battle field. Pink is a black child who is educated, while Say is a white child who cannot read.
After Pink's mother Moe Moe Bay is killed by the Confederates for hiding the boys, Pink believes that returning to war is the right thing to do and Say believes he owes it to his country to return to war in order to end slavery.
Answer:
The highlighted word should be culture
Explanation:
This is how I would look at it... If the sentence doesn't specify what culture (in this instance) adopted it and you are leaving the reader with questions then that is your vague word! Hope this helps and good luck with your classes!
