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i write it on my notebook but wait i will check it again..
I would say his purpose is to show how she and her community live everyday something near that
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I think ur essay really has potential
But I would include details of specifically how your hardships translated to a better work ethic, more compassion, etc
Also, in the intro part you say you weren't born with a "gold spoon" in ur mouth...the actual phrase is "silver spoon"