Answer:
Explanation:
<u>If someone wants to play games, </u><u>they</u><u> must follow the rules.</u>
The wrong pronoun was there. 'You' is a second-person pronoun. The sentence is in the third person.
<u>The bowl of raw vegetables </u><u>looks</u><u> appetizing.</u>
'Vegetables' is plural. So, 'look' needs to be plural.
<u>The couples spent their time dancing and </u><u>relaxing</u><u> with each other.</u>
'to relax' needs to be replaced.
<u>Her eyes</u><u> are</u><u> the most beautiful eyes in the world.</u>
You don't need a comma after 'eyes'. 'Are' is a subject pronoun we require in the sentence.
<u>After</u><u> running in the park, my shoes began to hurt.</u>
That is a sentence fragment. We need to make it make sense.