We can see the person writing this is trying to get a job. He/she uses inappropriate words and phrases for trying to get a job like "totally" and "hope you hire me"
I'm not sure how else to answer this, if this doesn't answer the question let me know how you'd like me to.
Answer:
the 3rd sentence in the second paragraph, does not need to be their because it just describes an unimportant part
Explanation:
The only reasonable answer to this question is d. She goes to school by car
Answer:
I'm guessing you meant bold
Explanation:
She is a subject pronoun
Subject pronouns are those pronouns that perform the action in a sentence.