I would rather come from old money because that insinuates that the money was probably inherited and so you never really needed to work to gain that money. You are automatically set from the beginning itself and so its easy. Gatsby had to work hard to make all the money he has and still he gets no respect or true reward whereas Tom gets all the respect and loyalty just because his family had gave him a good foundation and reputation to start with.
I was only able to find 1 pronoun shift.
Teenagers often want more freedom, but you need to show that you are responsible.
i’m pretty sure it’s d :)
