The father wanted to go on a camping trip with his boy because he wanted to form a relationship with his son after being distant for a year.
i think the answere is a a long pause for emphis
Good start. make sure when someone is speaking put the question mark in the quotations or any other puncuation in the quotations. check over commas. Ex. he said, "hello." check spelling. check puncuation. over all good story. great job.
