One time me and all my friends went bowling which made me very happy. We played a few rounds and even though I didn’t win a single one I had a great time! After we finished playing we decided to go to the arcade and me and my friend Darby decided to play pool, and I was surprisingly really good at it even though I’ve never really played before! That day we just really fun and i wish it had lasted forever however it of course came to an end eventually, and I hope I get to go again soon!
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