Question

[1] Cory tried out for his school play, Rumors, by Neil Simon. [2] Cory got the part of “Ken.” [3] Cory attended rehearsal every day after school, and he practiced his lines every night. [4] Cory was fantastic on opening night. [5] Cory made the audience laugh!
why dose this paragraph lack sentence variety ?

Answer 1

Short paragraphs, un varied punctuation, the redundant use of the subjects name