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Make sure you have a good hook. It has to get their attention.
Make sure to use all the correct grammar and punctuatio.
And lastly make sure to use big words (use them in the right way though)
Explanation:
A woman was considered to be the property of her husband????
Answer:
“ Jonah getting swallowed by a fish is really a story of Jonah being rescued by God. God did not give up on this self-serving prophet who wanted to do things his own way. If God wanted to give up on Jonah, he would have let him drown. He did not need Jonah to accomplish his purposes. God has every resource at his disposal. He could have easily used someone else to go to Nineveh, someone much more faithful, whose heart had some compassion and mercy toward others. He rescued Jonah not because he needed Jonah, but because Jonah needed him. You see, this really wasn’t about the Ninevites so much as it was about Jonah. Jonah was in need of God’s rescue – not just from drowning, but from the hardness of his own heart. God has every resource at his disposal. “
Explanation:
Answer:
On the 3rd of February last I officially laid before you the extraordinary announcement of the Imperial German Government . . .
American ships have been sunk, American lives taken, in ways which it has stirred us very deeply to learn of . . .
There has been no discrimination. The challenge is to all mankind. Each nation must decide for itself how it will meet it.
The choice we make for ourselves must be made with a moderation of counsel and a temperateness of judgment befitting our character and our motives as a nation.
Explanation:
im not sure the answer i needed the points sorry
Answer:
It's very beautiful and passionate!
Tips:
-you put "once you get to the top" twice so try changing or deleting the second one.
-some common grammar mistakes (capitalize, correct spots for commas/periods, etc).
-try not to use "etc" in your writing.
-you spelled "realize" as relies
Other than those the story was good!! :)
