Question

The excerpt below is the beginning of the results section of a recommendation report about exercise equipment for a new fitness center. What is wrong with the excerpt?

Answer 1

Answer:

You should never include or integrate conclusion into the section for the results of your study

Explanation:

A research paper or an excerpt have different sections that make up the entire paper with each section having what it contributes to the essay or research or excerpt in general. You cannot write an introduction and a body of an essay or excerpt together; the same way that you cannot combine the result and conclusion section together. The result section is a standalone section that is usually followed by discussion and then conclusion. Hence integrating the conclusions into the result of this study is wrong.