Number 8 is agree. But I think this is more of a personal test
You will need to be organized
Build your paper with clear sentences so that your reader will understand what you are saying
Make persuasive arguments
Answer:
I dont see anything. But my advice is just dont use a question unless you are in younger grades. Depending on what kind of passage this is, maybe report on an issue. State an interesting fact for your passage for the hook.
(Last sentence) Do you believe the story about the president (George Washington) who, as a boy, admitted to his father that he cut down the cherry tree?