All the sentences in a paragraph should be unified and coherent.
Answer: sentences
From the topic sentence to the concluding sentence, they need to be unified and coherent for the writer to truly get their point across as it was intended.
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Answer:
I think he´s (partly) right
Explanation:
Partly right because yes, colleges are flooded with individuals who seem to be out of place and not learning anything that they could have learned outside the school building. Murray´s essay follows quite clearly the opinion of Noam Chomsky. The strategical creation of a separated American class system is a daring theory that needs some (personal) coments because of its elitist element, i.e. we who study have (keep) the power.
Two examples:
México is a democracy in name where the powerful and rich people send their kids - no matter how stupid they are - to college schools and private universities that only exist as the entry door to a well-paid job. And even if you don´t go to university you can always buy your degree, as former president Fox did.
Germany is a real democracy that has a social education system. It is costly but the economic support (bafug in German) for students is based on how much your parents earn. If your parents are poor you get more money per month to study and vice versa.
Now kindly look at the American educational system and see if it resembles more the Mexican or the German system.
Answer:
1. Determine purpose
2. Narrow the subject
3. Find reliable sources
4. Brainstorm
5. Audience
6. Organize the information
7. Make an outline
8. Voice Tone Draft
9. Determine a thesis
10. Edit
11. Revise
Answer:
My brother and his friends go out.
Explanation:
That could be just an example of what you could do. It's your decion though.. I think. I'm really sorry if it ends up wrong!!
somethings not "write" in the town . Change it to right
Last sentence after Nevertheless it needs a comma
Second sentence Thoughts rushed "threw" jacks mind. Change it to through