It is really a great story so far. What you need to do next is to write what did Ryker and Noelle do when they heard the footsteps above them. Did they investigate or did they leave the house? Since Ryker had already told Noelle that his brother was going to try and murder her, I don't think you should send them directly upstairs to see what or who made the footsteps. You should let the story continue a little more to be more dramatic. Don't let the story be a cliche like others would do. Perhaps, they could hide and wait to see who comes down. They could also catch the brother and then call the police or even the parents. You want the story to be different and have more excite to make the reader be wowed in the end.
Athena helps Odysseus carry out his vengeance by helping him conceal and reveal his identity.She augments his own skills, but she does not control him.She makes Odysseus look like himself again. Odysseus explains that Athena is responsible for his magical transformation.<span>Athena has assured Odysseus that he can trust Telemachus, but he does not trust any other member of his family with the news of his return. </span>
Marcus faced physical and emotional abuse. He and in his friends were in a tough situation because they were kidnapped and his friend was stabbed. Marcus was in a lot of pain which was not good for his health. The biggest problem Marcus faced was he might never see home again.
Not too sure, but I think it’s the last option: This is a complex sentence because it joins an independent clause with a dependent clause
