People should not worry about what others think.
Answer: I read the text and it seems perfect and I think you don't need to add anything else.
Explanation:
Analyzing the task and the way you responded it seems to me that you did it well. You were precise in each of the years. I think you should not add more since it would be a bit more extensive and the important thing about this task is to point out the most important events of each year. In my opinion, I wouldn't change anything, I think it's very good.
I could also see that you used the connectors that the statement showed. You have followed the instructions very well. Congratulations!
Thesis statement: The Death of Ivan Ilych presents a strong example of realism. Topic: Realism in the death of Ivan IIych. Textual Evidence: Ivan Ilych's life had been most simple and most ordinary and therefore most terrible. Explanation: Thesis statement basically gives the scope, main idea or purpose of the essay.
Answer:
"rise in opposition or armed resistance to an established government or ruler."
Explanation:
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