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Answer:
The central idea of the text by James Kuzner is that the very idea of "love at first sight" is possible, depending on the persons involved. Though most people may find it impossible or even improbable for love to happen in such short notice, Kuzner seems to imply that it is indeed possible.
Explanation:
James Kuzner's informational text <em>Should We Scoff at the Idea of Love at First Sight?</em> details the two contrasting yet dominating ideas of <em>"love at first sight"</em>. In his essay, he presents an argument of how both sides of the argument can be approached, but at the same time, provide a compelling approach to the idea.
The whole paper details how most people seem to denounce the theory of falling in love at first sight, or even having a connection in a short time. But while this idea may also seem impossible or even illogical, Shakespeare is proof that some people do have the connection even in such a short time of their meeting. So, while most people may not believe in the possibility of love, Shakespeare's "Romeo and Ju l iet" is proof that it is indeed possible. It all depends on the persons involved, even though there may be times when there's a conflict between love and infatuation, or even lust. Whether it be scientific experiments or surveys, there is a slight possibility that it is indeed possible for such occurrence.
B. Do. B is the correct word for this sentence because are the others are grammatically incorrect
Answer:
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Explanation:
The first girl is a creepy school girl who was wondering till she found a lab filled with bird whom she can communicate with. i leave the rest to you.
The second girl is just a normal teen in a weird costume trying to do a POV. Take it from here
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Okay. So. First of all, rlly nice story =D I'm glad you got what you wanted. Now, to the point.. at first, I started to list every point where i thought you can change, but to be honest, and i mean no offense when i say this, but i think itll take me a very long time and a printed out version to mark it up so i think ill jjust give u a couple of tips. I hope they help.
- you dont exactly have any main idea going... only after reading the entire thing did i understand what "the battle" was and why you were anxious to get the results. you should clarify in the beginning what it is youre talking abt. a sentence like " Sixth grade had just started, and already I had begun to lose focus. My brain seemed to constantly drift towards other, more important things; like the upcoming custody battle between my parents over my brother and I."
-dont use the same word over and over again. try not to use it more than twice in one paragraph, it becomes repetitive, and a little annoying to read. An example: '<span>That battle was cemented in my head, all I could do was think about that battle.', I would change the second "battle" to "it"... you can do the same to other sentences, just look up synonyms and replce them, itll mean the same thing.
- Also, words like "socializing" might be too strong a word to use.... you can put 'talking' lol... its important to remember that you dont always have to use big words, and especially when youre writing a personal narrative, you should stick to ones you use on a day to day basis... save the big ones for formal essays :)
- the tenses seem to change throughout the story.... you start out correctly. in the past tense, and then u use a verb in the future tense, such as "will happen"
- don't add details you dont need or dont support the main idea... like the part about forgetting your brother. its just a side detail. or u can change how u introduce that detail. instead of the two or three sentences about forgetting him, u can just write " I was so anxious and excited to find out what the results were that i forgot to pick up my younger brother on my way back home from school, and ended up having to go all the way back to get him, prolonging the suspense."
If you want more specific details on where to change exactly what, i suggest you go to someone in person, they might be able to help you more. Best of luck! </span>
