Answer:
Why Mothers should stay home and Why mothers shouldn't stay home.
Explanation:
Many mothers out there have many things to. But the biggest job that some mothers have, are to take care our their baby. Some mothers think very different. Some mothers think that once their child is in their teenage years, they should be find. And many mothers disagree with that.
Some mothers stay at home just to rest, or just to be lazy. Mothers should stay at home to take care of the house by cooking and cleaning and prepping etc. Other Mothers should stay home so that they can take care of their children. Also it is very dangerous for woman to leave the house alone, no matter if it is day time or night time.
According to Men "Women are a very easy target." Meaning that we are easy to talk to, look at, and other things. Some men believe that women are soft. Not all woman are soft, and not all women are hard. And the same thing goes for the boys. There really isn't a such thing as being soft or tuff, there's something called Protection. Not all woman know how to protect themselves, but that's something that we will need to start working on.
In the story entitled "The Rockpile", Gabriel was a husband to Elizabeth and father to Delilah, Roy, and Paul. He had a bad temper and he took it to the beatings of the family members. Thus, in this story, Elizabeth's avoidance was due to her being frightened of him. The answer is therefore, the last choice.
The absence of my noisy baby brother was unusually relaxing. :)
I hope this helped.
Answer:
See explanation for answer.
Explanation:
Tips:
Maybe instead of saying "ain't nothing I want more than your love" say "I want nothing more than your love" for a classier and more professional line.
I would reccommend taking out "you're a catipiller, you're becoming a beuatiful butterfly" because in my opinion it almost seems like your belittling the person you love. Try using a different metaphor.
"ill love you to the day that I die" should be "I'll love you till the day that I die" which I might also change because it sounds very similar to a line in the song "Piano Man" by Billy Joel. Just a tip.
When you say "love is all I need, love is all I want" maybe say "your love is all I need, your love is all I want"
Advice:
Try creating stanzas, it will help your poem look more finished.
Compliments:
I love the comparison "like roses you have thorns" and "like a bull I have horns" cause that's basically you admitting that you know neither of you are perfect.
I love your ending, it's very well thought out.
I hope I helped!
Have a lovely day!