It would be helpful for him to point out spelling errors, capitalization errors, punctuation errors, run-on sentences, any time you got off topic, anything that helps you improve the quality of your paper. He/she should also tell you good things too like "That was funny" or "I liked that" which helps you know what to put more of in your future papers. Hope that helps!
That burtus should tell Portia what is on his mind so that she can help or at least try to console him
The following parenthetical citations uses punctuation correctly: Mr. Wednesday is described as having "a craggy, square face with pale grey eyes"
