Possibly because the ocean is frozen in the north and it is too cold with no goods to ship.
Hello!
I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
Answer:
Hello (choose a name) do you want come into my house to spend this Puja vacation with me ?
Answer:
<h2>
<u>1ST STORY</u></h2>
1.Negative message: Inflicting any kind of harm on others will come with consequences.
2. Positive message: Any act of kindness can lead with a great reward.
<h2>
<u>2ND STORY</u></h2>
1. Negative message: Don't shame yourselves of how you look, it's how you act.
2. Positive message: No matter how you look your personality always shows who you are.
Explanation:
<h2><u>
1ST STORY</u></h2>
1.The negative message on the first story is that inflicting any kind of harm on others will come with consequences.
2.The positive message on the first story is that Any act of kindness can lead with a great reward.
<h2><u>
2ND STORY</u></h2>
1.Negative message: Don't shame yourselves of how you look, its how you act.
2.Positive message: No matter how you look your personality always shows who you are.
