Question

Read the sentence. the driving test examiner told me to turn right and park, and then i almost hit a tree, and then he screamed. which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence? i turned right to park, and then i almost hit a tree, and then the driving test examiner screamed. the driving test examiner told me to turn right, then park, and then i almost hit a tree, and he screamed. the driving test examiner told me to turn right and park. when i almost hit a tree, he screamed.

Answer 1

I'm almost positive it's, "The driving test examiner told me to turn right and park. When I almost hit a tree, he screamed." Hope this helps!

Answer 2

"The driving test examiner told me to turn right and park. When I almost hit a tree, he screamed."