You might want to add more descriptions of the subject you are researching, or use quotes from articles to help it be known that it is genuine research. Make sure to cite the article and use in-text citation to avoid plagiarism.
A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused.
They tend to kick when they feel threatened.
My Grandfather would spend hours telling me stories that I’d love to hear.