1answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
Rus_ich [418]
3 years ago
10

HI,Can you help me please? thank you very much!

English
2 answers:
enyata [817]3 years ago
7 0
Overall this conversation was pretty terrific, but there are just a couple mistakes. The grammar should be overlooked and a couple things you say could be revised to sound less formal. For example:
"Madam" could be changed to miss or just not said at all. It sounds a bit formal to say over the phone. 
"Viola" could be changed to "Here it is!" or "Yes, I have it now."
 
Other than that, you have a pretty great conversation! My only questions are:
Are you French or the woman on the phone or do you just like to talk in French 'cause you are saying a ton of French words.
By the way, did you not like my last answer 'cause you are ignoring all my questions and answering all of the other girl's comments. If you do, why don't you just tell me?   ):

I feel really bad because you don't seem to be answering anything. Or am I just completly guessing that you don't like it and you really do? Anyways, I hope this helped. (:
Digiron [165]3 years ago
4 0
Well, it seems to be pretty good as it is. I would suggest a few grammatical changes, just to make it flow a little better. Also, I don't know if you're trying to be overly polite in booking the tickets, but people don't tend to be so formal when buying things over the phone, but that isn't really important for homework like this.
J'aimerai should be translated, and the sentence should be condensed a bit, so it would be something along the lines of "I'd like to have two seats for my friend and me, next to each other and in the middle, if possible."
Near the end, one of the responses is written as "Just a second, I seek. Viola." It should be rearranged slightly so it flows better, so something like, "I'm looking for it, just a second," or just "Just a second." The "I'm looking for it," or "I seek," as you wrote it, is often implied. "Viola" can stay, if you'd like, or you could say, "Oh, I found it," or "Here it is," if you use the implied version.
Below that is the phrase "All is perfect..." This seems a little weird to me, so I would suggest saying something like, "It's all good," or just "perfect."
When thanking the person over the phone, most people don't use the title "Madam." Just a simple "ma'am" or "miss" would be used, or no title at all, just "Thanks."
I hope this helps!

You might be interested in
Who is Allison Block? I have an assignment about her yet I could find much. Looking from anything to her works, background, aver
mylen [45]

Answer:

Allison Block was raised in the Catskill Mountains where her mother owns a Century 21 franchise and her father was a manager of Kutsher's, the famous Borscht Belt resort upon which the film "Dirty Dancing" is based. Block grew up watching her mother do deals and learning about the hospitality business from her father, a unique combination that gave her the skillset to become the real estate professional she is today. When she moved to Manhattan in 1991 to attend New York University, a passion for exploring the city and its architecture was ignited. That, coupled with her family's background, naturally led her to a career in real estate. With more than 16 years of experience in residential sales and rentals, Block is City Connections' point person on exclusive landlord accounts. One of the things that sets Block apart is her ability to personally stage properties, which gives your listing an edge. Staging is one of the most important aspects of selling a home and can often be the difference between selling quickly at the highest price possible or sitting on the market for months. Block's staging talents have resulted in bidding wars on nearly every apartment she's sold. Block prides herself on honesty and integrity. If you want someone you can trust to seamlessly guide you through the minefield that is New York City Real Estate, Block is the agent for you.

Hope This Helped!

4 0
3 years ago
Since Macey did not eat breakfast this morning, she has been hungry all day.
Vikki [24]
I think it’s simple!?!
3 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
Lincoln's vice presidential candidate was _____ the choices are Ulysses Grant, Andrew Johnson, and George McClellan
vazorg [7]
The answer is Andrew johnson
3 0
4 years ago
Read 2 more answers
At the age of 18 months, Helen Keller was rendered deaf and blind. Unable to read, write, or speak, it was thought that Helen wo
marusya05 [52]

Answer:

PART A

The correct answer is option A.

By using words such as studied, learned, and lessons, Keller helps readers understand that spending time in the natural world was a positive experience that taught her a great deal.

In paragraph 1, we can say that Helen's description of nature was a great deal as it taught her all she now knows. Hence the line, “The loveliness of things taught me all their use”. She describes nature as a teacher without which she would not have been able to understand things.

We can also say that the "outdoor" lessons helped her a great deal.

PART B

The correct answer is B.

It captures how excited Keller was to experience the natural world and learn from it.

Helen Keller could not wait to experience more of the natural world. She was excited to learn from nature as she finds solace in it. Hence, "Sometimes I rose at dawn and stole into the garden while the heavy dew lay on the grass and flowers".

7 0
3 years ago
Do artists need empathy and knowledge to create great art?
rosijanka [135]
No not at all
Thats not what defines their art

7 0
3 years ago
Other questions:
  • Which theme is reflected in this excerpt from Charles Dickens's Oliver Twist?
    11·2 answers
  • Decide whether each characteristic is true of the Māori myth, the Haida myth, or both.
    6·1 answer
  • Which sentence does not contain any punctuation errors?
    15·2 answers
  • When the British colonized India,they exhibited ____policy of government
    10·1 answer
  • HELP PLEASE ASAP
    15·1 answer
  • Read the following passage. What is the central idea King is attempting to express?
    11·1 answer
  • Erica has to give a presentation in front of a group of co-workers. She is feeling very nervous about this, and is surprised bec
    9·1 answer
  • Help-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
    12·2 answers
  • Explain why Constancia considers her grandmother to be, in her eyes, “ridiculous” and “bizarre.”
    9·1 answer
  • Which of the following sentences has an error with an
    10·1 answer
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!