Overall this conversation was pretty terrific, but there are just a couple mistakes. The grammar should be overlooked and a couple things you say could be revised to sound less formal. For example: "Madam" could be changed to miss or just not said at all. It sounds a bit formal to say over the phone. "Viola" could be changed to "Here it is!" or "Yes, I have it now."
Other than that, you have a pretty great conversation! My only questions are: Are you French or the woman on the phone or do you just like to talk in French 'cause you are saying a ton of French words. By the way, did you not like my last answer 'cause you are ignoring all my questions and answering all of the other girl's comments. If you do, why don't you just tell me? ):
I feel really bad because you don't seem to be answering anything. Or am I just completly guessing that you don't like it and you really do? Anyways, I hope this helped. (:
Well, it seems to be pretty good as it is. I would suggest a few grammatical changes, just to make it flow a little better. Also, I don't know if you're trying to be overly polite in booking the tickets, but people don't tend to be so formal when buying things over the phone, but that isn't really important for homework like this. J'aimerai should be translated, and the sentence should be condensed a bit, so it would be something along the lines of "I'd like to have two seats for my friend and me, next to each other and in the middle, if possible." Near the end, one of the responses is written as "Just a second, I seek. Viola." It should be rearranged slightly so it flows better, so something like, "I'm looking for it, just a second," or just "Just a second." The "I'm looking for it," or "I seek," as you wrote it, is often implied. "Viola" can stay, if you'd like, or you could say, "Oh, I found it," or "Here it is," if you use the implied version. Below that is the phrase "All is perfect..." This seems a little weird to me, so I would suggest saying something like, "It's all good," or just "perfect." When thanking the person over the phone, most people don't use the title "Madam." Just a simple "ma'am" or "miss" would be used, or no title at all, just "Thanks." I hope this helps!
Dangling modifiers occur when the modifiers are far from the object they modify. As a result, the meaning of the sentence is confusing, obscure, ambiguous or senseless.
In the first sentence, it is unclear to deduce whether the backpack or Abner were attacked by the school bully. Thus, the right version could be:
<em>The backpack fell from Abner's shoulder when he was attacked by the school bully</em>.
In the third sentence, it is not precise to figure out whether Amaury or the keys were slipping on the wet sidewalk. As a result, the modifier should be placed closer to the modified object, as it stated in the second sentence:
<em>When Amaury slipped on the wet sidewalk, the keys fell from his pocket.</em>
To write a text we have to follow a series of steps. The first is prewriting, in which it is decided which the main topic, the point of view about that topic, the objectives of the text, and a style of writing. Secondly, we must review other sources related to the main topic. The third step is writing taking into account the parts that it must contain (beginning, development, and conclusion). Then, the fourth is reviewed text again to correct some writing errors. According to the above, the correct answer is C. Prewriting.
hope this helps ( i am not very clever so if it doesn't help, please delete this answer)
Explanation:
1) "'lady, i am sorry' whisper the boy"
2) "dragging the frightened boy behind her"
These both show how the boy is scared. in the first examples, the boy whispers which show that he could be trembling. the second example, (which isn't a good example) show that he is scared of the woman. the woman seems to want the boy to be scared and she doesn't have any respect for the poor boy, this is also shown in the line "she did not release him".
The given paragraph can be put in correct order as:
The first part of the given paragraph should be:
After heating the air in the bottle, put the egg upright on the mouth of the bottle
and then the other part follows:
As the air in the bottle cools it contracts, creating a partial vacuum that draws the egg inside.
Finally, we write it as:
After heating the air in the bottle, put the egg upright on the mouth of the bottle. As the air in the bottle cools it contracts, creating a partial vacuum that draws the egg inside.
