I think your essay is wonderful! You said your opinion in your first paragraph, then stated why in the next ones. Also the big if is pretty cool. Keep on writing essays and lapses will be corrected. Try to proofread and check the spelling so that it will be better.
I am always interested in learning new things, isn't it?
I guess that's "setting".
Then I will have to hear the usual lecture. I am used to it now, so that's nothing much.