The argument is ineffective and can be improved significantly. First of all, he writes the claim in the first person. A formal persuasive essay should be in the form of third person. The author can improve his support by using less opinions and back-up his thesis with facts and evidence and does not take a strong stance on the conclusion clincher. The author also does not efficiently connect his essay. There is no cohesion and his diction is weak. He can improve it by using stronger vocabulary.
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1) We had a birthday party last wednesday.
2) Bill and I played ball together.
3) She missed the bus last friday.
4) Joe has a broken arm.
5) Is Labor Day a national holiday?
6) The first day of school is in August.
7) We have many new students this year.
8) Jim and Ray are in my class.
9) I got a new puppy.
10) The puppy's name is Buster.
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The function of your paper's conclusion is to restate the main argument. It reminds the reader of the strengths of your main argument(s) and reiterates the most important evidence supporting those argument(s).
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It's asking you if the Cambodians and the Mexicans in California exist lesser today than the Irish and Italians of Massachusetts long ago. I hope you could understand what I meant. :)
