Question

Which sentence contains an error in the use of end marks or commas? A. During the holidays, my mom helped me put together a package of goodies for Tammy. B. Since October, I've been writing letters to a soldier overseas. C. Tammy wrote a very nice thank-you note, saying how much she appreciated the package. D. When Tammy comes home, from her tour she said she wants to come to visit us.

Answer 1

The answer is D. When Tammy comes home, from her tour she said she wants to come to visit us.

The comma after "home" is not necessary, it just pauses the sentence. "When Tammy comes home from her tour she said she wants to come visit us," sounds a lot more natural. Hope I helped :)