Answer: In general, use sentences of different lengths. Also consider moving adverbs or adverb clauses from the end of a sentence to the beginning.
For transitions, think about the relationship between ideas. Is it a time sequence? Use words like first, then, after that, finally. If it's logic, use words like because, since this... then that. Or therefore, as a result.
Explanation:
Hey Senpai,
Hey Haylee, I wish you were here... I’ve had to deal with a lot of things without you... school has gotten worse since you moved away, the bullies have been targeting me. They throw rocks at me, they say I should never have been born... but I am getting used to it. I can’t wait till I get to go to your house, is it cool? Is the neighborhood cool? I have a ton of questions, but we both know if it sucked, you’d move back here lol well, I love you... hope you feel great and are being appreciated
Yours truly, The polite Senpai
(This is a real letter I’ve sent to my friend)
Explanation: Seedfolks is a children's novell written by Paul Fleischman, with illustrations by Judy Pedersen The story is told by a cast of characters living on Gibb Street in Cleveland, Ohio, each from a different ethnic group. Chapter by chapter, each character describes the transformation of an empty lot into a vibrant community garden, and in doing so, they each experience their own transformations.
Hope this works kid
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