Why don’t you try it yourself instead of cheating-
If i am to use a proper spelling and grammar, that sentence could be changed into :
The store, with its half roof covered in snow, was freezing to the point where the customers were visibly shaking
hope this helps
The romantic period, which preceded the realist period, glorified war. The Civil War, however, resulted in the loss of many lives on both sides of the war. The horrific reality of the Civil War left no room for such an association in realist works. Realist writers such as Bierce, writing after the war, dwelled on the painful and gory aspects of war. The Civil War also led to a cynical and sometimes bleak outlook on life, which realist writing often reveals.
