If you write something, pretending to know something, then you will not get anywhere. Teachers and academics alike will not like reading something that is not researched properly.
So know what you are writing about. That is the very first step.
The first step to writing any essay is brainstorming, but I don't know if your instructor wants that. I would just say it's either getting a hook, writing a thesis, or just plainly brainstorming.
I think a correct way of saying this sentence would be: Some of the people just do not know how to drive right. or Some of the people do not know how to drive right/correctly.
