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A good hook should start with a question, or say the most interesting part of your story, let the person want to read more, then start the story, because that would make the reader want to read the rest of the story.
I would say order of importance, His classmates parents complain about Charles, and it occurs in a war-stricken country
Adjectives describe things
You can't say "he = ride".
That would be "he = riding".
"Ride", as an action, is a <em>verb</em>.
Do you mean unscramble it to make a real word?
If so, answer is Soulmate
And mine a sad one." Reminiscent of the philosopher Jaque's speech in As You Like It, "All the world's a stage,/And all the men and women merely players," this line is spoken by Antonio in an attempt to explain his recent melancholy to his friends. ... He insinuates that Antonio is only pretending to be depressed.