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fgiga [73]
3 years ago
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It was a hot dry day last august when I realized that I was tired of Summer. On that day I came to the conclusion that Summer da

ys were too warm, too long and too sunny. I decided to get in my car and drive North to the mountains for some cool air which I love and shady trees. It was the best decision I made all Summer.
Write three to five sentences explaining what should be done to edit this paragraph for errors.
English
2 answers:
Veseljchak [2.6K]3 years ago
7 0
It was a hot and dry last August when I realized that I was tired of summer. On that day I came to the conclusion that summer day's were too warm, long, and too sunny. so I decided to get into my car and drive to the mountain for some cool air and shady trees, which I love. It was the best decision I made all summer
BlackZzzverrR [31]3 years ago
5 0

To edit the paragraph, the writer should put a comma between hot and dry because they are coordinate adjectives. The word August should be capitalized, but summer and north should not. Finally, the writer should use a serial comma in the list and set off which I love with a pair of commas to avoid confusing readers.

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