-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
The assignment wants to assess your writing ability. For that reason, I will not write your letter, but I will show you how to write it.
<h3>Letter structure</h3>
- Say hello to your friend.
- Explain why you are writing the letter.
- Show that you have decided which profession you want to pursue in the future and the reasons that led you to make that choice.
- Explain how this profession is beneficial to society and the country.
- Say goodbye cordially.
You will need to research your profession, identifying how it works for national progress.
Remember to write a short, objective letter that is straight to the point and uses informal language, as you are communicating with a friend.
Learn more about informal language:
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Over or above I think.. please mark Brainliest if I’m right, not needed though!
Answer:D
Explanation:it creates a sense of knowing the characters most private thoughts
