Paraphrasing is the act of rewording, revising, simplifying and expressing the text in your own words with additional clarity. Note that condensing the text to a shorter form should not be in your interests because that would be summarizing, not paraphrasing. Check this out:
Come capture
California's cityscape and let us cater to your cravings!
California beautiful
countryside comprises of the famed and celebrated Oregon Trail. Just bring a
few resources, a wagon, plenty of water and you could strike it rich!
"Rich? What do you mean by rich?" Well, California is a complete
goldmine! We offer affordable land in abundance which complements our cluster
of gold! We even have friendly encounters with Native Americans every once and
while! Our Chinese migrants are constructing a railroad and sculpting
California into charming residence for you! Come join us and let's make
California the cultivating and captivating home it could be!
Hope this is catchy enough. c;
<span>Columbus's voyage was about the acquisition of gold and spices. He started his long voyage with the aim to find India, where he would get those two things from, however, somehow he ended up in the New World, which he thought was India, but was in fact what came to be America. Thus, mistaking America for India, he named the inhabitants of the continent Indians. </span>
<span>The Internal Revenue Code is the highest statutory basis of federal tax law in the United States.
Early settlers had no representation in parliament in Britain, so no one could stop Britain from increasing taxes and laws they found unfair.</span>
It seems like we have a number of precedents in the past as well. <span>For example Confucianism
is a popular philosophy found in Chinese culture, looking at the teachings
given by the Confucius it seems it had more of a practical and worldly approach
than religious, the reason why Chinese elite were struck by the phenomenon.
Another example is of Greek rationalism from where even the modern Western
philosophy and secular thoughts seem to emerge. According to this religion had
its own dominion separating scientific and philosophical issues. Similarly,
legalism can be another example.</span>