I'm not the greatest at grammar, but I think the very first one is incorrect. It should just be a comma, then the second just a comma as well, but the last one is correct. (I have no idea, I am sorry if you get it wrong.)
Answer:
what does this mean????
Explanation:
What paragraph?
Answer: It is c 90% sure
Evelyn shows resilience by embracing the family's busy new life in New York City.
Explanation: not 100% but i think that is it please tell me if im wrong <3