Question

31 POINTS [1] Toy poodles get a bad rap. [2] Although a little feisty, they are also exceptionally intelligent. [3] They are said to be one of the most trainable breeds around. [4] And here's something potential dog owners may not know: for their size, toy poodles are excellent guard dogs. [5] One toy poodle actually scared an intruder with it's angry barking. What is the BEST way to improve the sentence fluency in the paragraph? A. Make the tone consistent. B. Combine sentences 3 and 4. C. Vary the beginnings of the sentences. D. Add transition words to some sentences.

Answer 1

Just train the toy poodles, it’s not difficult. Idk why ur using this app to answer such simple questions

Answer 2

Answer:

I think the answer is A.

Explanation:

By making the tone consistent, it seems like the writer is jumping around less. Using some transition words would really help this paragraph flow, in my opinion. At the moment, the words kind of jump around from place to place, and might confuse the reader.

Hope I was correct!!

~Kweenie~