31 POINTS [1] Toy poodles get a bad rap. [2] Although a little feisty, they are also exceptionally intelligent. [3] They are sai
d to be one of the most trainable breeds around. [4] And here's something potential dog owners may not know: for their size, toy poodles are excellent guard dogs. [5] One toy poodle actually scared an intruder with it's angry barking. What is the BEST way to improve the sentence fluency in the paragraph? A. Make the tone consistent. B. Combine sentences 3 and 4. C. Vary the beginnings of the sentences. D. Add transition words to some sentences.
By making the tone consistent, it seems like the writer is jumping around less. Using some transition words would really help this paragraph flow, in my opinion. At the moment, the words kind of jump around from place to place, and might confuse the reader.
In retrospect, nothing can be done with how the world works. Nationally or internationally. To have a boundary is not to keep anyone out, but to state that this place is owned by someone other than you.
