This author uses many figures of speech:
1. Hyperbole means over exaggerating the sentence. From text " Don't get too close or he might bite!"
2. Metaphor means put words that are not related in a sentence. From the text "Ben growled at the man who parked too close to his car."
3. Personification means formal language in a sentence that has a sense of imagery. In text "He was always guarding his prized possession."
Improve the community and have more respect of others beliefs.
I believe it sounds best as "Jake bent the old, rusty hanger back into shape."
<span>If I like it:
Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:
I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better:
I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.</span>
<u><em /></u><em>it is very simple but very important
1 they do not make spelling mistakes...
2 they have a strong grammar concept...
3 they stay away from plagiarism
4 they try to summarize whole topic to make it easy to understand
5 they try to write different topics in comparison... :)</em>