I am not sure what level you are but for me as a 12th grade student, I would get a big F for that sentence. But for you, it might be okay.
Here is how I would write it if it was for me
The first reason I like carpeting is because I have an interest in it. I like touching the carpets because it is soft and I love sleeping on them. To make a rug, you have to make it as a three-dimension triangle with the whole floor. Of course, making them isn't always easy, but it worth it. Especially at my house, we put carpets everywhere. Those are one of the reasons I like carpeting.
Tips: When you are writing an essay/assignment, make sure you don't repeat the words over and over. That will show the teacher you don't know enough vocabularies. As you can see, I used carpet and rug, they are the same thing. but if you keep saying carpet carpet over and over, the teacher might gets dizzy.
You must have at least 5 sentences in each paragraph.
And by the way, when you say you like something or you support something, you must give some examples. You need to tell the reader why you like carpeting.
I hope this helps!
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The employment opportunity which was accessed by the people of one country in another country (foreign) for earning their living is called foreign employment.
