Answer:
B. Word choice
Explanation:
If your editor keeps noticing and pointing out reppetition, then you may want to try and be more diverse woth your wording. Definetley try using different adjectives to add more detail and keep it interesting for the reader.
Answer: Allied bombing raids destroyed many German jets while the jets were still on the ground.
First, Montresor must hide his feelings of hatred for Fortunato. He does this so successfully that throughout the entire plan, and even at the end, Fortunato has no clue that Montresor wants to kill him.
Second, Montresor chooses Carnival time to enact his plan; this guarantees that Fortunato will not be immediately missed, buying Montresor some time if he needs it. Brilliant.
Third, Montresor must be able to bring Fortunato to his empty house. To do that, he does the simplest and most clever thing he can think of to do during Carnival time
Answer:
Explanation:
Formal: I am afraid of that place, he is a strange sort of person, don't worry child
Informal: That place gives me the heebie-jeebies, that guy is a weirdo, take a chill pill, kiddo
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