1) A ball just went through not threw 2) should be piece instead of peace 3) neighbours 4) they're game again- doesn't make sense, should be they're playing that game again. 5) should be allowed instead of aloud. 6) should be red door not door red 7) I'm not sure about as a beat? 8) We were once children too instead of to. 9) Well, children need to play (Add the capital letter on well)
