The only problem I seen wrong with it was there was one word spelled wrong and that was basis. Other than that, everything looks fine.
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No, You should use evidence in all of your paragragps EXCEPT for in your intro and conclusion. If you use all the evidence in the first one then the reader will not want to read it anymore.
Explanation:
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Where is the poet? Post the poet then I can answer it.
Include a picture of what you are reading because we don't know what you are looking at.
He is simple subject while doggie treats is the simple predicate
