For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Using 1000 plants, each for an individual barrel. The plant that was poisoned will die within thirty days, that way the people will not die. Personally I don't see what's so bad about using 1000 humans as text subjected though ;)
Answer:He's always on the lookout for chances to give back to the community. For instance, after hearing about an Atlanta resident whose home burned down, he paid for her new house.
Answer:
Legend is based on fact and then stretched, and myth was never real to begin with.
Explanation:
1. Legend was based on some fact, until the truth was stretched so far it became just a story. A myth was never a fact to begin with.
This is significant because a legend has evidence, which may be incorrect, but a myth does not have any evidence whatsoever.
2. Legends are set in a historical period of time from a particular culture that is more recent. A myth is set in the ancient past (hence, once upon a time).
Answer: professional
Explanation:
The opposite of amateur is professional
