He was being followed when "Suddenly" He heard a loud noise.
Why would she "Suddenly" Remember that phrase?
"Suddenly" he jumped to his feet.
The compromising conflict style is often referred to as the “lose-lose” method. When you address conflict with this style, you encourage each side to make some significant sacrifices. By definition, this means that neither side gets exactly what they want
You need a comma after "at first". get rid of the second period in the fourth sentence. get rid of "but only the buildings."
