To get rid of... so like, purging when you're referring to the eating disorder would be to make yourself throw up or just get rid of the fat. When people say purge it usually has a negative meaning, as well
Can i see a part or small image of the text
Remove the period after play and remove the comma after Monopoly.
Jennifer Aniston taught me how to play Monopoly however, I've beaten her three times in a row.
d. giving the reader enough detail to form a picture in his or her mind.
The key to description is to give the reader enough detail or information in order to form or create a vivid picture of the thing, place or scenario in his or her mind. The important features, the characteristics of the subject being talked about must be clearly described an emphasize in order for a description to be a success. It is only when the listener or the reader be able to draw the scenario out of the descriptions given will we say that the description is delivered well.
The truck delivered a large load of lumber to the site
