(1) Renee had been very careful about her costume choice. (2) Anne had told her that there would be a prize for the best costume
, and Renee wanted to win. (3) She’d decided to dress up as a zombie. (4) Her mother had helped with the makeup, and Renee’s sister had found a messy wig for her to wear. (5) Renee felt very confident as she rang the doorbell. (6) Renee felt a furious blush spread across her cheeks. (7) All of her excitement, however, disappeared when the door opened and she saw the other party guests. (8) No one else was wearing a costume. Which revision BEST creates effective and appropriate organization for this story?
A) Move sentence 3 to follow sentence 4.
B) Move sentence 6 to follow sentence 8.
C) Move sentence 7 to follow sentence 5.
D) Move sentence 8 to follow sentence 1.
By moving sentence 6 to follow sentence 8 it is showing her embarrassment after she had found out the party was not a costume party. (almost like Mean Girls. if you've ever seen that)
The right answer for the question that is being asked and shown above is that: "It adds to the high standard the speaker is claiming one must meet to love another."In this excerpt from “A Woman’s Shortcomings” by Elizabeth Barrett Browning, this is the effect of parallelism
