(1) Renee had been very careful about her costume choice. (2) Anne had told her that there would be a prize for the best costume
, and Renee wanted to win. (3) She’d decided to dress up as a zombie. (4) Her mother had helped with the makeup, and Renee’s sister had found a messy wig for her to wear. (5) Renee felt very confident as she rang the doorbell. (6) Renee felt a furious blush spread across her cheeks. (7) All of her excitement, however, disappeared when the door opened and she saw the other party guests. (8) No one else was wearing a costume. Which revision BEST creates effective and appropriate organization for this story?
A) Move sentence 3 to follow sentence 4.
B) Move sentence 6 to follow sentence 8.
C) Move sentence 7 to follow sentence 5.
D) Move sentence 8 to follow sentence 1.
By moving sentence 6 to follow sentence 8 it is showing her embarrassment after she had found out the party was not a costume party. (almost like Mean Girls. if you've ever seen that)
The Socs and greasers choose to have the rumble in a vacant lot in greaser territory, because the lot is a less conspicuous place where they hoped the cops would not break up the fight. Moreover, the lot is convenient for the greasers in terms of location because it is in their neighborhood.
