So what would be the question you are asking? if you're asking how to hook a reader in your intro start with an onomatopoeia or something like: On a dark and stormy night Elle Mist sat in the corner of her room crying wondering when her parents would come home.
In Shakespeare's<span> Macbeth, the </span>porter<span> scene that comes after the killing of Duncan makes the reader laugh. The </span>porter<span> is a strange gatekeeper. </span>
A “thwop” is supposedly the sound when you serve mashed potatoes, like when you throw it off your spoon. So, you can word it as a serving of mashed potatoes or the sound of serving mashed potatoes.
