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<em><u>the fraction is the </u></em><em><u>form written by in the form of </u></em><em><u>p</u></em><em><u>/</u></em><em><u>q</u></em><em><u> </u></em>
<em><u>hence</u></em><em><u> </u></em><em><u>p#q</u></em><em><u>.</u></em><em><u>.</u></em>
In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
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