Answer:
Answer 1 : The text is lacking correctness.
Answer 2 : The text lacks coherence.
Answer 3 : Text is fine. If we must choose only one option , it should be correctness.
Answer 4 : The text lacks conciseness.
Answer 5 : The text lacks clarity.
Explanation:
Answer 1 : "Further to our conservation today.." it should be conversation to make the text correct.
Answer 2 : The sentences are random. They do not have any links with other sentences of the text.
Answer 3 : Since the text is an informal communication among a close group, and the content refers to some already discussed point, so such a text is acceptable in informal communication.
Answer 4 : Conciseness refers to language that's brief and to the point. The language used in this text is neither brief nor to the point.
Answer 5 : Kevin wanted to talk James about the project, but in the next sentence he says he might need John’s help. hence the text is not clear.
