Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
This is the best example of adding concrete details. It specifically says which alarm box Schaffer told his assistant. The original sentence makes it seem as the miscommunication was the big problem. While it was a problem, the fact that the firefighters went to the incorrect location is really the reason the Chicago fire of 1871 was so devastating. Including these details makes the writing much clearer and easier for the reader to follow.
Because he is shut out of the conversation between Henry Foster and the Assistant Predestinator.
Answer:
The speaker seems to feel as though William Dodd is a liar who should be questioned
Explanation:
in the line, "Dodd states that from the hardships he endured in a factory, he was "done up" at the age of thirty-two, whereas I can prove that he was treated with uniform kindness, which he repaid by gross immorality of conduct, and for which he was discharged from his employment." this proves that the speaker is suggesting that Dodd is lying about how factor conditions were for him, and that he can prove his accusation.
I thought it was great but when he stole books it was horrible
Answer:
Backyard
Explanation:
adverbs deal with where, how, when, how often, and how much. The one that makes the most sense is Backyard.
