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Women's right to vote--the original goal of the women's movement was to gain the right to vote as stated in the Declaration of Sentiments.
Susan B Anthony and Elizabeth Cady Stanton held the Seneca Falls Convention and set the goal of women's suffrage for the women's movement. They would not be alive to see the goal reached but 1920 brought the 19th Amendment giving women the right to vote.
It was necessary to win the war because the south wanted to separate and that would make the south and north both weak also the south wanted slave but the north didnt