Answer:
omg why did uou title it english this is music ;(((((
Explanation:
The thing that you should not look for when you are revising your own article is over explaining the topic. I think that jeornalists look for details and supporting those details.
She should begin proper nouns with a capital letter as nouns are always capitalized. Also, she should italicize the names of magazines as the titles of things that can stand by themselves are normally italicized.
